Saturday, August 27, 2011

Promise

Here's the cinquain I entered in the challenge for that poetry form.  This poem tied for third place.


Promise

Be still                                  
Hear him whisper
all you desire to know
about what is to come…just that
He’s there.

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  1. Jack BrownNovember 22, 2011 at 2:13 PM

    folks forget to take time to be still and then they say they can't feel His presence....

    as ever I like your poems

    biiiiig hug

    JayBee

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  2. ElaineNovember 22, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    Wow, JayBee! So good to see you here. I can't wait for you to read my Pilgrim poem. I can't post it until it has been judged. Thank you for your comments!

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